Research Feedback

Jess - there is some basic research here but you need to achieve more focus in each post - they tend to jump from one thing to another and leave the reader a bit muddled. Have a clear idea what you are investigating in each post and stick to that topic only please.You still have some gaps in your research and would do well to use my comments on each post to improve what you have already done. Well done on completing and uploading your prelim task.